If I Wrote Transformers: EarthSpark

As a person who has been betrayed one too many times by flippant storytelling, I don't like to dedicate a lot of emotional energy to things unless I'm sure there will be adequate payoff. If a book piques my interest, I will open it to the first page. If the first page does not hold my interest, I will flip to the last page... Yes, I am that person. Same thing goes for TV shows: If I watch the trailer and it intrigues me, I will go watch the first episode. If the first episode fails to grab me, I will watch the last available episode or the season finale. That was the case with Transformers Earthspark just now, and boy howdy! What even was that?

I'm not a movie critic, and its not my intention to start a blog reviewing shows for people or parents looking for something to watch. I just had cogitations about the show is all. If you want to see my compliments and complaints, click the expandable box below. There are spoilers though, so be warned.

Compliments & Complaints: Warning: Spoilers!

✨ First, my compliments:

• Story: They had something going there. What happens AFTER Cybertron's restoration has rarely been explored since G1, but Earthspark did it.

• Character designs: I liked most of their designs. There were a few I wasn't a fan of, but all the other bots (old and new) were nice to look at.

• Answers to questions we've all had: How newborn Transformers come into being, and what "child" Cybertronians are like is something I've desperately wanted to see done! Also, how bots born after the war would view the conflict between Autobots and Decepticons is a very interesting idea.

• "Cybrid" idea: I really like the idea of the Terrans and the human Malto kids being actual personifications of the now-entwined destinies of Earth and Cybertron. For some reason, the planets can never go back to being separate, they have permanently converged as is made manifest within the Maltos.

• Character development bridging the generation gap: The veterans obviously have a lot of trauma and prejudice they'd still be working on, while these new starry eye'd bot children would have an outsider's perspective on the whole matter; and perhaps be able to bring to the table solutions that neither side had really considered before. It was fresh! There were a lot of possibilities there.

• Two worlds, one family: I liked the idea of a family dynamic forming between humans and bots. Raw potential really.

🔪 Now, here are my complaints:

• Skipping character development and bonding: Two new bots are born in front of two human children and instead of having the four bond like normal emotionally intelligent beings, we use a magic-glove-to-instantaneously-bond-us cop out. Then newborn bots appear before the older bots, and instead of regarding them with wonder as the newborn hope of a species nearly gone extinct, Optimus and Megatron shrug it off- Immediately wanting to give the kids to the swat team who apparently controls every aspect of Cybertronian life on Earth. While that wonder and hope IS addressed in later episodes, it just seemed wonky that it was totally skipped over in the first place just so the Terrans can get kidnapped and Mandroid can be established as the villain.

• Personality murder: Optimus did NOT act like Optimus. I should know because Optimus is my favorite character of the franchise. There was nothing leader about that guy, just cheesy foot soldier. Where is his accumulated wisdom of all the Primes? Where is his characteristic gentleness and restraint? The Megatron character murder is more forgivable, since he's clearly had a change of spark at some point, but there are still moments when he says or does something that have the audience go: "Yup, that's Megatron". Not so with Optimus.

  Holes in the setup: Why are Optimus and the Autobots foot soldiers for G.H.O.S.T? Optimus and the other bots should be Cybertronian ambassadors to Earth, helping capture rogue Decepticons and take them back to Cybertron where they belong, to stand trial or be imprisoned properly. What is this permanent exile of keeping them on Earth? Has Cybertron NOT been restored? If not, then why was Croft talking about conquering it? If the surviving Cybertronians have no hope of returning to Cybertron and have to live on Earth now, there should be some adjusting to that involving world powers. Ya know, trying to find their place or establish their own society and dwelling or whatever? Every single Cybertronian being a foot soldier for a swat team to hunt down every Cybertronian that doesn't want to be part of the swat team is a serious issue in setup. Also, Optimus has apparently lost his moral compass, or his sense of anything, because we let evil scientists kidnap these captive Decepticons and corrupt government officials run experiments on them, and we don't even care that any of that is happening. And if the war is over, then why are Decepticons not allowed to move on? Why are Autobots not allowed to move on? Why are Autobots still employed in hunting down Decepticons, and Decepticons being hunted down even if they're not causing trouble? I mean, this could conceivably be a plot device, but the fact that it is never actually addressed makes it a hole.

• No background, loose threads: Megatron has apparently switched sides. Which, you know, isn't that unbelievable-- But how? And why? When did that happen and what caused him to do that? He said that it was Dorothy, but what did Dorothy do that got through to him when other humans and even Optimus couldn't? Why didn't any of his followers go with him? Why is Megatron treated like the liberated victim when he literally led that world-desolating crusade in the first place? Meanwhile his victims and followers are treated like bad guys who bullied him into it. What started the war?

  In the finale, Mandroid is defeated but we never see what happens to him. Despite the fact the human members of the Malto family have been unconscious through the majority of the finale, they suddenly know exactly what the tower is and how to use it to fix everything. What happened to the spear that knocks bots offline? What happened to the Decepticons that showed up to help? Why is there a symbol in the sky?

• Absence of emotion and emotional bonding: The character emotions felt hollow. This is the finale, yet everyone acted like acquaintances who barely even knew each other. The Maltos are supposed to be a family, right? Why do they feel so totally insincere? "Our parents just got eaten!" Well, that was weird, on to the next thing. "We just lost our brother and sister!" No sweat. I'd follow you anywhere, Twitch! "We don't have a chance but we totally have a chance! Who's with me!?" And everybody cheers instead of voicing uncertainty or any vulnerable emotion whatsoever. The characters go through one trauma after another, but never express more than the vaguest inkling of any emotion over it. They just moved on it from a second later in favor of more "action"-- I mean, they literally watch a human being explode, and nothing. The brother of that human stares in disbelief for a minute-- Just a minute, mind you. Then he's over it, and we're back in action. "Oh, our bot brother might be dead!" Brief weepy moment with literally two faint sobs, then a nose wipe of "All better, hey look! My magic glove is glowing!"

• Inconsistency in the scene changes: The situations the characters found themselves in were not followed through with from one scene to the next. Croft goes from standing on a burning car to standing on the lawn-- And not even on the same place on the lawn from one scene to the next. How does Shockwave go from standing apart from the group, being restrained, to standing beside the group and totally fine a second later? Thrash is on the edge of the cliff in Mandroid's grip, but a second later he launches a weapon into Mandroid's head and somehow, he's not in Mandroid's grasp anymore and they are standing several feet apart. They're not even in the same position on the edge of the cliff anymore. Like, how!? We went from being the monster's grasp, to somehow sneaking up on the monster and rescuing yourself as though you were never in the monsters grasp? Also, Mandroid goes from sitting on his throne to tumbling off his throne and rolling down the stairs. Why? What knocked him off?

• No showing the side-characters: We're left to assume things happened, rather then witness them happen. Did Starscream actually fight the mind-controlled Megatron? Dunno. They were in a relatively close proximity to one another when they passed out. Also, characters show up, then disappear and are never mentioned again. What happened to the twin banshees that Starscream had with him? They moved in to attack Megatron too, and we saw them fall out of the sky, but they weren't on the ground when Starscream and Megatron wake up.

• Slowest "fast pace" EVER: All of the action sequences felt anti-climatic because all they did was stand around staring at each other. Actually fighting, dodging or moving around literally seemed like an afterthought for everyone involved. Everything was rushed in the slowest way possible.

Final thoughts: The concept was brilliant, but the execution was downright ameture, especially in the finale. Like, what the hypothermic hemorrhage did I just watch?!?! Because it sure as hark wasn't a fully fleshed out piece of media.

I won't be continuing the series because it is my understanding that Seasons 2 and 3 take my compliment section and unceremoniously flush it down the toilet, leaving nothing but my complaints and actually adding to them. However, I DID actually enjoy a couple of things-- Enough to coax me into watching a few scattered episodes anyway.

I'm not the kind of person to really invest a lot of time in a rewrite or fanfiction, I did want to explore how I would've written the show.

Transformers: Earthspark, by C8E

Season One

If I wrote Earthspark, I wouldn't change too much about the first season. The G.H.O.S.T corruption and Mandroid arcs worked. Mostly I would do is lean more into the characters and establish the Maltos as a "legacy of hope" a little more. I would also make the situation with G.H.O.S.T a little more complicated; really outlining why every single Cybertronian on Earth answers to them and tie Optimus' hands in working for them.

For instance, after losing the Allspark and the Space Bridge, the Cybertronians are permanent residence of Earth now. This means they'll eventually have to establish their own government here, and as you can imagine, current world powers would want to prevent that as long as they could. After all, the Cybertronians are bigger and have more advanced technology then Earth. World governments would want such power for themselves, get the Cybertronians to pick sides and be citizens of their countries, not gain power unto themselves and be their own independent country. So, in order to prevent Optimus from establishing a Cybertronian government, they do what politicians do best and weaponize the personal pain of the people: Bringing their war to Earth in the first place effected many natives, and a lot of Earthlings harbor resentment toward the supposedly homeless refugees they now have to share their planet with. As such, world powers want every Cybertronian on Earth to be registered with and answer to G.H.O.S.T "for their own protection". Registering with a government, they say, will keep them safe from hostile natives. Optimus is not fooled, but having just ended the war with Decepticons, and not really wanting to start a war with Earthlings over their own planet, he and the Autobots have opted to play by their rules for now in order to keep the peace. That said, there is tension between the world powers too: Because the Cybertronian war landed in America, that is where Optimus felt fences needed mending, while the other governments of the world watch cautiously how America handles its advanced alien killing machines. This is the world the Malto children, human and Terran alike, find themselves born into.

I'd keep the Decepticon hunt in play. Decepticons, having technically lost the war, have been branded as outlaws. Originally, the rule was terminate on sight, but Optimus wanted to have as many of them pardoned as he could and pushed back against the government, having them incarcerated instead to give them a chance at reformation. Meanwhile, world powers are sending spies to America in an arms race to get ahold of as many Decepticons as possible, hoping that if they offer the Cons protection from the American government, they'll have powerful Cybertronian soldiers on their side. This is partially why Megatron works with Optimus now.

If I wrote Earthspark, Megatron would still be somewhat dangerous and not altogether a good guy. He's had an awakening to the precariousness of their situation as a species: without the Allspark, the Cybertronians are on the edge of extinction. The bots they have now are the only bots left. Without hope of the species continuing, Megatron doesn't want to risk losing any more lives. He also knows that the situation they are in now is his fault, which guilt kinda curbs his usual tyrannical fire-- But he's not fully on the Autobots side. He, like Optimus, is playing to the system in an effort to save the remaining Cybertronians. Whereas Optimus is trying to do what's best for ALL Cybertronians. The alliance between them is uneasy, only becomes a real truce wherever the Maltos are involved. You see, Megatron did have a slight change of spark toward humans after genuinely befriending Dorothy. He likes Dorothy, and he likes her kids.

This puts the Maltos in a favorable position with both sides, and sets the stage for them to be a real legacy of hope.

Now, about the Maltos. Earthspark, as it is written now, doesn't answer the questions it poses. It harps very heavily on the Maltos being a "Legacy of Hope", but it doesn't elaborate on that.

Season Two

After season one establishes the Maltos as a "legacy of hope", season 2 to explore what that meant: Such a fancy title and all the talk of evolution implies the next generation of humans and Cybertronians will be a united people of sorts. The Cybertronian race, despite having been nearly driven to extinction, can and will continue on Earth. The magic glove thingies accommodate that continuation by bestowing upon humans a way to connect, protect and care for the next generation. The show itself implies such, but doesn't elaborate on or explore it. So I will. Though to be honest, if I wrote Earthspark, I'm not sure I would include the magic gloves... Or if I did, I would give it a more 'convergence-of-worlds' meaning: Because they touched the stone, the brother and sister are now two halves of a whole, which whole used to be Quintus Prime. Therefore, the Malto children would be, after a manner, a cybrid Prime-- The essence of Quintus Prime reborn after merging with the human children. They, referred to as a Prime only jointly, have been elected to shepherd the next generation of Cybertronians born on Earth. The gloves would not only connect with the Terrans, but would enable them to connect with any Cybertronian who was friendly toward them.

"But wait!" I hear a reader cry, "What about Optimus and the Matrix of Leadership?"

I'm not sure Earthspark ever even mentioned the Matrix, or if it did, I never saw it. But yes, you are right. The human children as a Prime would be a colossal upset among Cybertronians, who would be force to face the fact that a human Prime means most undeniably that their way of life has changed and the fates of the two planets have merged. That said, the angle I would play to is that the Matrix of Leadership doesn't just make a Prime, it makes the leader of the Primes. Nobody ever said there couldn't be more Primes after the original 13, nor did they ever say that there couldn't be more Primes that Optimus would be the leader of as bearer of the Matrix. Ergo, while Robby and Mo are a Prime just like Optimus, they would still answer to Optimus as their leader. Does that make sense?

Well, it doesn't have to. This is what I would do if I wrote Earthspark.

...Or any Transformers show, honestly. I've always liked the idea of multiple Primes being reborn or chosen, and still answering to Optimus as the bearer of the Matrix of Leadership.

Plot wise, season 2 would establish Robby and Mo as the first human Prime, concrete the merger between Cybertron and Earth in this way, and resolve the goings on between the Decepticons and Autobots. After Mandroid's attack and G.H.O.S.T's corruption revealed, the government is scrambling for a way to cover their bases. The Decepticons are free, and no body is hunting them anymore, but their treatment in the G.H.O.S.T facility has caused an uproar among humans and Cybertronians alike. Even those who did not altogether like the Cybertronians, because such treatment of prisoners is barbaric-- And, you know, government coverups and conspiracies always sets people's hair on fire anyway, so yeah. So, season 2 sub-arc would be the grown ups dealing with the fall out of that. With enough evidence of corruption and the vocal support from humans now, Optimus is able to push back a little stronger against the government, which is supposed to be run by the voice of the people anyway. The Maltos would have more interactions with Decepticons, both positive and negative, as they would be key in driving home for them the fact that Cybertron and Earth are now permanently connected. This would explore an interesting angle of how Decepticons and Autobots alike--- A species in who's very CNA is written the code for change ---actually handle change, and how its not easy for them either, despite being the very essence of who they are.

Though initially welcoming to the Terrans as the hope that their species will continue, Decepticons and Autobots alike might struggle with or even resist the idea of a human Prime, and some might even be antagonistic on both sides. The Great War would not be the focus of their division any more. New lines would be drawn on how to handle having a human Prime in Robby and Mo. As a Prime, these human children outpower and outrank all of them save Optimus himself. We'd have a few character twists here, give a Decepticon or two redemption arcs and an Autobot or two a fall-from-grace, playing to the fact that "Autobot" and "Decepticon" were political factions of the great war, not the automatic distinction between a good Cybertronian and a bad one. Season two is where our fears regarding Megatron's sincerity would finally be put to rest, as he would permanently cast his lot in with the Maltos and subsequently the new order of Primes.

Earthspark's own season 2 arc of collecting pieces of the Emberstone would be completely void because in my version, Robby and Mo would've absorbed the stone after Hashtag, Nightshade and Jawbreaker were born. However, that being the case, season 2 also poses the question as to how more Terrans will be born. The "hope" of the Cybertronians literally does lay with Robby and Mo. Meanwhile, they have to figure out how to use the power that Quintus imbued them with. As it turns out, they are not able to make more Terrans at this time, because the strength of their current age can only muster five presently. Their Prime power will get stronger and more nuanced as the two get older, and as they get older, they will be able to create more Terrans. A question I would have one of the characters pose, but would never actually answer in the show is whether or not Robby and Mo are going to age like humans or whether the Prime side of them will enable them live the lifespan of a Cybertronian.

Season Three

Season 3 would explore a different possibility to what "Legacy of Hope" implies: The restoration of Cybertron.

I'm very disgruntled by the fact that Earthspark has gone for three seasons, and even introduced outside alien threats, but doesn't explore the ultimate fate of the Allspark or Cybertron. If the show was implying that these kids are a legacy or hope because they will prevent another war, and bring the Decepticons and Autobots together for good, that would make sense. That seemed to be the case most heavily leaned into anyway, and seemed to be what the finale underscored-- But apparently not because, according to my research, Season 2 and 3 abandon the concept of "War over. New start" entirely! If Earthspark is just more Autobots vs. Decepticons, the franchise is full of shows like that, so what makes Earthspark so special? What makes the Maltos a "Legacy of Hope" if they're just a new breed of ally for the Autobots? That seems like a really lofty title for such a copy and paste concept. The Autobots have a lot of allies, bro.

Anyway, my version of Earthspark, season 3 would go a little crazy in a different direction. The Cybertronians are now establishing their own government on Earth and building a city (A reference to The Autobot City for G1 fans.) when suddenly they receive a distress signal from Cybertron, but the voice belongs to a very young bot. A newborn.

The Maltos would go with a united Autobot-Decepticon team, including Optimus and Megatron, to return to Cybertron via a newly reconstructed space bridge. They would arrive to find Cybertron is alive, but different. It is wild and untamed, the cities are desolate, overrun with wild animals and cybertronic flora. Basically post-apocalyptical, but cyber style. The Allspark, as it turned out, DID make it back to Cybertron-- But without anyone there to shape its restoration and regrowth, it was as feral as the day Primus first became the planet. Here is where the Maltos and their allies would encounter the Quintessons threat, and this is also where they would meet newborn Cybertronians who don't know what on Cybertron they're doing.

As a matter of fact, I like the idea of a cyber-being or two as part of the group on Cybertron: Humans that were born on Cybertron, and can thus breathe its atmosphere and live off energon! Like the Maltos in reverse. The new Cybertronian kids would also be semi-cybrid just like the human Malto kids, and be able to connect with their cyber-man siblings in a similar way, signifying that the connection between Earth and Cybertron is still very much in force. Robby and Mo would be the Prime for this whole new generation, the Earth-born Terrans and the Cybertron-born Cyberbeings. It would be a thing. These Cyberbeings and child Cybertronians would be adopted into the Malto family, just as the Terrans were.

Defeating the Quintessons and liberating Cybertron would be the plot of season 3, and the whole show would wrap up with some Cybertronians choosing to return to Cybertron to rebuild, while some staying on Earth. Likewise, some Earthlings go to live on Cybertron and some Cyberbeings going to live on Earth. The space bridge would link Cybertron and Earth forever, but the destiny and hope of the two planets would be forever linked by something much deeper then that: The Maltos.

The End.

... So yeah. Like it or hate it, that's my two cents. Thanks for reading!

The Strange Thing

Imagine you are walking through the woods one day and suddenly notice something out of place: Hanging off a tree branch just in front of you is a jalapeno pepper.

"Hello, little pepper. What are you doing there?" You may be inclined to ask.

"I'm not a pepper. I am a strange thing, and I'm getting ready to fly." It replies, "Flying has been my only dream for as long as I've been alive."

"How long have you been alive?" You inquire.

"Thousands of years." It responds, "But I'm closer to flying now than I have ever been before!"

Would you feel inclined to pity this thing that has no wings but has been trying to fly for thousands of years? Would you scoff at it? Many would. In fact, many have. So many that the Strange Thing once struggled with doubt, thinking maybe it was wrong and that its dream might never actually come true.

In a few, very painful instances, individuals who actually had wings have met the Strange Thing. "You could make fake wings if you had the materials... Or arms to use them." They've said, as if that was encouraging, then flew away and left the Thing alone. Others, who had no wings and no interest in flying, have complimented the Thing for its remarkable feat at having gotten on the branch in the first place. To them, the Thing will ultimately never fly, but its gotten up pretty high and should be proud of its efforts.

"There are airplanes! Get on an airplane and someone else could fly it for you." Some have advised, only to mutter under their breath how expensive airplane tickets are.

Oh, how the Strange Thing knows this!

"Why do you think you will fly?" You could ask, "Why haven't you given up after thousands of years and chosen a more realistic goal?"

"Because God has said that I can fly. He will help me fly someday." Answers the Strange Thing.

You can say whatever you want to after that; you can tell the Strange Thing that it'll fly in the afterlife, or that literal flying might not be what God meant. You can even accept the Strange Thing's answer and continue your walk, never looking back at the Strange Thing or even thinking about it again. Whatever you choose to do, let me tell you the ultimate fate of the Strange Thing:

Where you saw a jalapeno pepper, wanting to fly but without any real way of doing so, God saw something more. Because He put it on the branch where you found it, and He gave it that dream of flying. He told it that it could fly, and for thousands of years, it has tried. One day, the Strange Thing is going to try to so hard that it will crack open, and a beautiful butterfly with big, colorful wings is going to emerge from inside it.

And that Strange Butterfly will fly.

Just because a chrysalis takes a long time to change into a butterfly does not mean that it never will. The change just isn't happening where you can see it. Never scoff at a Strange Thing that talks of flying even though it doesn't have wings. It simply doesn't have wings yet.

Through God, all things are possible.

A monarch chrysalis. (Photo taken from off Google)

The Witch Child's Amulet: #6

Chapter 6 - The Secret of The Amulet

When Bridgette returned to the cottage later that night, she was amazed to find Vano, sitting with his arms folded on the table and his chin resting atop them, watching as Meep filled its little belly with the rest of the mushroom stew. Behind the specter lay the coveted Keonor Root. Her shock and elation were so great in that moment that when Vano told Bridgette that he’d given Meep permission to stay with them, he received no argument.

Finally, the Potation of Location was brewed and the two companions ingested it simultaneously. Its effects were not as intense as the effects of raw Mind Mallow; rather the potion imbued them with a very subtle, subconscious awareness of one another that Vano didn’t really notice until the following morning. He awoke to find Bridgette absent from the cottage, yet he knew exactly how far away she was and in which direction to go to find her.

Bridgette was out collecting big red mushrooms with white spots, which the pair had previously agreed were likely poisonous: Fly Agaric. When Vano arrived, with Meep at his heels, she instructed both to collect as many as they could. The mushrooms were brought back and planted in a large circle around the cottage, then Bridgette brewed another potion. A ‘Faux Fairy Ring’ potion she called it, and put a drop of it on each mushroom’s cap. To Vano’s surprise, the house suddenly disappeared, leaving only the tree it had once resided under. Bridgette too, who stood within the ring of mushrooms, vanished with the house; yet because of the Potation of Location, he knew she was still there. As he stepped within the ring of mushrooms, he found the house as well.

“The hallucinogenic properties of Fly Agaric mixes with the potion to create an illusion.” Bridgette explained, “It’s not as good as a Miric illusion or a proper cloaking spell because you can still see the mushrooms, but it’s the best I know how to do.”

After that, Bridgette lost all concern for her human friend, and frequently left him to his own devices while she went out to train. Meanwhile, Vano felt he could at long last fulfill his desire to explore Niris Tul. He took to wandering far and wide with Meep, climbing all the hills that Bridgette had avoided, and trees too whenever he found one that he could scale. During these exploits, and thanks to the Potation of Location, Vano learned the true immensity of Niris Tul’s ancient spell: When he stood still and focused on Bridgette, he could feel the direction that she was in orbit nearly a half-circle around him, yet the view of the swamp ahead did not alter in the slightest. Every day, he found somewhere new to explore, because he could never find the same place twice.

Meep continued to collect magical resources as Bridgette indicated she had need of them, and in response to any thanks she gave, it would offer her the grass doll.

The three of them; Bridgette, Vano and Meep, spent two weeks living together in the mire house. During that time the house was filled with garden boxes and hanging planters, which Vano crafted out of dead tree branches and old vines he found in his wanderings, and Bridgette filled them with seeds from the magical resources that Meep collected. At Bridgette’s request, Vano also added a garden box to the side of the house, where the water from the mire pooled. There, she planted a thin piece of the Keonor Root.

In later years, Vano would recall that time spent in the Niris Tul mire house as some of the happiest of his life. For Bridgette, it seemed like she had woken up from a terrible four-year long dream and found everything the way it used to be; except that she lived with a father now instead of a mother.

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One day, Vano and Meep were out and about once again. They had gone several miles from Bridgette and the mire house, and had just scaled a very tall hill, when Vano caught glimpse of a tree arch out of the corner of his eye. “Look at that, Meep!” He said, “Why, that’s nearly a perfect arch. The only time I’ve ever seen something that round was when it was man made.”

Meep chirped and followed him as he approached it. He put a hand to the bark of the bent tree and thought he felt it shudder; or perhaps it caused him to shudder. It brought to his mind the thought of energy, but he didn’t know why. Was he feeling the life within the tree? He’d done so once before as a boy, with a tree a magician had told him was more awake than most, but in that instance Vano recalled the life felt like a powerful vibrance of deep seeded strength; not a vibrating energy. Maybe different trees felt different.

Vano swept around the trunk and under the arch. Immediately, the illusion dissipated: Instead of seeing more unremarkable swampland down the hill from where he stood, he found himself faced with a steep, natural stair, cut out of the earth and overgrown with grass; leading down to a monolithic structure, overgrown with moss and vines. Vano stumbled in surprise and fell down the stairs, but managed to stop himself before he reached the bottom or sustained too many bruises.

Meep rushed after him, coming to his side just as he crawled backward, up one step and sat there. The specter climbed his arm, up to his shoulder and peered at his face, chirping in questioning concern. Vano did not give heed to it. He continued to stare in awe at what they had accidentally discovered.

“I think we found something we weren’t supposed to find.” Vano whispered.

Meep chirped.

Suddenly, Vano’s attention was grabbed by movement below. He noticed the building ahead had a large door, which was open. Half of him worried about the trouble he would be in if he got caught, but more prominent was the voice in his mind telling him that he would never have a chance to explore this place ever again if he left now. So, he stood and continued down the stairs until he came to the doors and passed inside. To his astonishment, he discovered the building was an ancient library.

The walls, from ceiling to floor, were lined with books. A spiral staircase at the far end of the building ascended up to one balcony after the other, higher and higher until it was lost from view in the shadow of the tower. Each book looked well preserved; despite being so clearly exposed to the elements. There was no glass in any of the windows, grass grew out of the floor, vines and other foliage riddled the shelves. Birds, squirrels, and other small creatures Vano couldn’t name scurried to and fro. Even those strange balls of light from the swamp hovered here and there.

Vano was so lost in the wonder of the place, he almost didn’t notice that there were several magicians around him making use of its services. He looked at each of them anxiously, but they took no notice of him. Each person was busy with a book, or searching for a book, or speaking in hushed tones with a companion. It gave Vano a little courage. He ventured further in, with Meep still on his shoulder.

Inwardly, he bubbled with excitement; was he the first human to ever set foot in a magician library? Probably not, but he didn’t care either way. He only wanted to open one of those books and see what was inside it. Vano made his way to a shelf and grabbed the first book his fingers touched; a heavy one with a dark blue cover and golden binding. Clutching it with both hands like a greedy child, he scampered toward the spiral staircase, intending to sneak behind it and shield himself from suspicion as he gleefully explored the book’s contents. Upon rounding the stair, however, he found himself face to face with Nyx!

“Klippin!” She exclaimed, then checked herself. “I mean Kolompar. I guess Klippin is not your real name.”

Vano started, but couldn’t decide whether to drop the book and run, or throw it at her. His indecision caused him to just stand there and stare at her. “It is my real name actually.” He responded calmly, resolving not to show fear in case it activated some latent maniacal tendency in the magician’s genes. “Klippin is my first name. Kolompar is my last name.”

“Oh.” Nyx said.

Vano waited, but nothing followed. She did not raise the alarm, and didn’t even look like she intended to. Instead, she bit her lower lip, lowered her eyes and twiddled her thumbs. It seemed she didn’t know what to do in this situation either. Several minutes of awkward silence passed with the two standing across from each other.

“I owe you an apology.” Nyx said suddenly, looking up and meeting his eyes.

“No, you don’t.” Vano said bluntly, “You owe Bridgette an apology.”

“Yes. Her too.” Nyx said, an expression of shame coming to her face. “Her especially. …Uhm… Where-- Where is Bridgette?”

“Hiding.” Vano replied.

“She didn’t lose you, did she?” Nyx asked, seeming suddenly concerned, but he couldn’t tell who for.

“No. I know where she is.” He said.

“Ah, of course. Potation of location. She would know how to make one of those, wouldn’t she?” Nyx chuckled, rubbing the back of her neck.

Vano didn’t know how long he should keep this conversation going. He wondered how to politely excuse himself, but before he could do so, Nyx suddenly reached over and grabbed his arm with both hands, dragging him around behind the spiral staircase. He saw a cozy reading spot back there, but at the moment his focus was on Nyx.

“What are—” He began. Nyx lifted her finger to her mouth.

“It’s Father. He mustn’t see you.” Nyx said, glancing cautiously around the stair. Vano didn’t really believe her, so he risked a look around the other end. She was telling the truth. Ikalis had just entered the library and was looking up searchingly toward one of the balconies. Quickly, he approached. Nyx and Vano ducked behind the stair simultaneously, subconsciously sitting next to one another on the reading bench. Neither dared breathe as Ikalis ascended the stair until the sound of his footsteps died away.

“Is he searching for you?” Vano asked, looking at Nyx with a suspicious glare.

Nyx’s gaze was still focused in the direction Ikalis had gone. She shook her head. “He’s probably looking for a book on potion lore. My family is not as skilled in potions as Bridgette and her mother.” She looked at Vano with a soft smile. He detected deep sadness in her eyes at the mention of Bridgette’s mother and felt his heart pricked by it. Though he didn’t want to let his guard down around this woman, he couldn’t deny he was starting to feel it slip. Nyx wasn’t as hardened as her mother and father. Maybe, just maybe, there was a reason he’d run into her again.

“Did you know Bridgette’s mom?” He asked, his tone softening.

“I did.” Nyx replied with a chuckle that was both fond and sad. “Avalon was my favorite person ever. She was so beautiful and kind, and loved so deeply. I remember spending hours in her cottage as a little girl, watching while she brewed potions to sell at market… It was the only place I felt was really safe after--” Nyx bit her lip to stop herself.

Vano didn’t push for her to finish her sentence, he was barely even listening. His mind was going back over all the stories that Bridgette had told him about her mama, and finally putting a name to the woman: Avalon. It was so perfect.

“Klippin, I’m sorry.” Nyx said, drawing him out of his thoughts.

“You already said that.” He replied.

“No. I’m truly, TRULY sorry. I didn’t know what to do, but I should’ve done something. Anything. I was just so shocked to hear Mother say she wanted to kill you, I couldn’t think. We owe so much to you.” Nyx continued earnestly.

“What?” Vano asked, taken aback.

Nyx took a deep breath before explaining, as if bracing herself to reveal something that her family was not okay sharing. “That name, Kolompar, is known to us because your father was the one who enslaved us. He captured all three of us; my father, my mother, and myself. We lived in Suddlepuff.”

Vano felt his heart skip a beat, then fill with dread. Miva’s merciless hatred toward him, upon learning his name, finally made sense. “You lived in Suddlepuff?” He repeated in a gasp.

Nyx nodded. “I was only six or seven, but I remember seeing you around town, apprenticing yourself to the various artisans. I even watched your puppet show. You seemed fun, but I confess I was afraid of you. Mother told me you were the son of our enemy and not to be trusted… Then… Then the day after the castle collapsed, you returned to Suddlepuff and set us free. You said no one had to stay if they didn’t want to. So, we left. I’ve never forgotten that. These many years I’ve spent in Niris Tul, getting to meet my aunt Avalon before her death, I owe it to you really.”

Vano didn’t know what to say. He almost couldn’t believe it. Frantically, he searched his memory for even a glimpse of Nyx somewhere. Had he ever noticed a young Ayto with pink markings on the streets of Suddelpuff? He couldn’t recall. Then an image flashed through his mind of a small magician child watching his first puppet show from across the street. Yes, it was Nyx, a few months before the castle’s collapse. Vano remembered wondering why she didn’t come over and join the other children in the audience, but then forgot all about it as his show continued.

“I’m so sorry, Nyx.” He whispered.

“No! Don’t say that. You never did anything wrong. I don’t blame you for what happened.” Nyx said quickly, “Like I said, I’m grateful to you, because you taught me that not all humans are bad. I’m humbled that, after all this time, you’d be sent from across the world to teach me another lesson: That I should’ve stood by Bridgette.” She looked away remorsefully.

Vano stared at Nyx. His view of her had completely changed. She wasn’t an enemy. She was a victim. She was confused; frightened by the things Miva and Ikalis had told her, conflicted by the fate they had sentenced Bridgette to, and deeply ashamed of her part in it.

“I should’ve done more to help her when she came to us four years ago. I could’ve taken her when Mother turned her away. …I should’ve taken her.” Her voice cracked. She looked at Vano again and her eyes were full of tears and agonizing regret. “I was just so afraid of Corvin.” She sobbed.

“Who is Corvin? Why is everyone afraid of him? And why is he after Bridgette?” Vano asked.

“Because of the amulet.” Nyx replied, trying to compose herself so she could speak clearly.

Vano’s mind returned to that day in his kitchen, when Bridgette had all her tricks displayed across the table, but refused to show him the last ornament in her pack. He had completely forgotten about it until now. “You mean that red one?” He asked.

“Yes. Corvin is desperate to have it.” Nyx answered.

“Why?” Vano asked.

“It’s part of the Witch-Hazel Curse.” Nyx explained, “You remember how we said the Witch-Hazels were trying to make an Ultimate Master Key? Well, the amulet was one of the means they were using to do it. You see, when the first Witch Kings made the master key, they were all Level 50-- And married. Their wives were Level 50 also, which technically meant their magic was Level 100 each. No magician has even come close to obtaining that kind of power since your uncle, Haygen, began his conquest. So, the Witch-Hazels created an amulet that would amplify a magician’s power by 10 Levels for a short amount of time, and sought high level craftsmen of all the coven families to wear the amulet while they imbued the new key with their ancient magic. But it wasn’t enough. The Witch-Hazels realized they had to increase the power of the amulet, so they started to imbue it instead, making it more and more powerful until it could amplify a magician’s power fifty-fold. That seemed to work, but then came the price… Then came the curse. The kind of power they sought to imbue the amulet with is meant to be obtained through hard work and true union, it cannot be contained in an object. The amulet became volatile. Anyone who wore it for too long would lose control, and there were many high-level magicians who suffered terrible injury because of it. Thus, the name of Witch-Hazel was blackened, because those high-level magicians were needed in the war effort—And now, they couldn’t fight.”

“Where does Corvin come in?” Vano asked.

“The Witch-Hazels wouldn’t give up. They were determined to make an Ultimate Master Key to present to the Heir of Keonor to save the enslaved magicians, maybe even the amulet as well. They passed the quest from one family member to the next, until the burden finally fell to Reuben; Bridgette’s father.” Nyx said, “Reuben and Corvin were childhood friends, and Reuben told Corvin about the amulet, but he himself wasn’t focused on the Witch-Hazel quest anymore. He and Corvin were part of the Great Witch’s rebellion; Reuben saw more hope in following The Great Witch, who had earned her power the proper way, than in trying to break the laws of nature with a volatile amulet. Sadly, because of the Witch-Hunters, Corvin and Reuben were captured and enslaved together. Corvin told Reuben to use the amulet to help them escape, but Reuben didn’t have it. He had left the amulet with his pregnant wife, Avalon. As I understand it, they spent years in captivity, and Corvin slipped further and further into hatred and insanity. Then an escape plan gone horribly wrong cost Reuben his life, and Corvin snapped. He cut off his own hand to be rid of the Magic Bind, and hunted down Avalon to get the amulet from her. But she refused to give it to him…”

Nyx paused for a moment, then continued: “He took the amulet, but not the Witch-Hazel’s well-intentioned but sadly misguided quest. He intended to turn the amulet into a weapon and wipe out all humanity with it. He hunted down Aytos to imbue it with more and more power, and even resorted to imbuing it with dark magic. That is why the amulet is red. It used to be white, but it is now tainted by blood. It is a terrible object now.”

Vano’s mind spun with all this information. He was starting to feel the full gravity of Bridgette’s danger, and understood now why she was rejected by all her people on account of her family name. “Why does Bridgette have it?” He asked.

“She stole it. She stole it back from Corvin at seven years of age, then came to find us. Anyone who helped her along the way was killed. Mother told Bridgette to just give the amulet to Corvin, but Bridgette refused, saying she wouldn’t allow him to kill the humans. …That’s all I know, I’m afraid. It was the last I ever saw of her until recently.”

Vano heaved a deep sigh. “So Corvin is a murderous lunatic, and he’s after my girl because she has his toy.” He surmised.

“I—I suppose that’s correct.” Nyx confirmed.

Vano clicked his tongue, but said nothing else, and rubbed his chin thoughtfully. He still had questions, but knew Nyx couldn’t answer them. After learning all this, he was sure his amazement over Bridgette could go no deeper; she was only ten! Then his thoughts turned to finding a solution to the Corvin problem. “Can the amulet be destroyed?” He asked suddenly.

“I don’t know.” Nyx replied, “I should think so, but it has a lot of power stored inside it, so only something equally as powerful could damage it.” Suddenly, her gaze shifted to the specter that sat on Vano’s shoulder. She chuckled lightly. “Who is this by the way?”

“This is Meep.” Vano said. Meep chirped.

“He’s adorable!” Nyx laughed, patting the creature on the head.

“Oh, so it’s a boy then. What with those eyelashes, I wasn’t sure.” Vano said humorously, glancing at Meep as the specter pulled a huffy face.

“Is that a grass doll?” Nyx asked.

“It’s Bridgette’s. Meep is really fond of her, but she won’t accept him on account of Corvin.” Vano explained.

“I see.” Nyx said, looking a little conflicted by that information.

“It’s getting late. I should get back to Bridgette.” Vano said suddenly, rising from the bench.

“Yes, of course. Will you give her something for me?” Nyx asked, suddenly bending over and grabbing a wrapped parcel out from under the bench. “I made it for her after our… Unfortunate parting. As part of my repentance.”

“What is it?” Vano asked.

“It’s a wand. I enchanted it with an amplifier. Any magic she uses with it will increase in power twofold.” Nyx said.

Vano gingerly took the parcel. “Should I tell her who it’s from?”

“Only if she asks. You can’t lie to a Narvian.” Nyx replied.

“I’ll give it to her.” Vano said.

“Thank you… And, uhm, this is for you. I’m sure you remember it.” With this, she removed from her waist the dagger she had used several weeks ago to cut the rope that held Bridgette and Vano together.

“Yeah, I do.” Vano answered.

“It’s also enchanted. It can withstand magic blasts and cut through any spell. I made it for myself though, so it glows pink when near someone who means to harm the dagger's wielder.” Nyx said, then added with a sheepish shrug: "...I like pink."

"So do I. But why are you giving it to me?” Vano asked.

“I didn’t have time to craft you a weapon, but if Corvin catches up to you two, you’re going to need one.” Nyx replied.

Vano set Bridgette’s parcel down a minute so that he could inspect the offered blade more closely. Drawing it from its sheath, he admired the skilled craftmanship. His only complaint was the red, two-headed snake on the hilt. Nyx must’ve somehow noticed his displeasure because she chuckled. “I’m sorry. That’s my family crest.” She said. Vano sheathed the dagger and strapped it to his side.

“Thank you, Nyx.” He said honestly. Nyx seemed to beam. Shyly, she reached over his shoulder and stroked Meep’s head. “It was good to meet you, Meep. I wish you wouldn’t go back to Bridgette—But… No. That’s selfish of me. Bridgette needs allies. Take good care of her.”

Meep chirped affirmingly.

Nyx looked at Vano again. “And you, Klippin Kolompar, if ever you need anything an Ayto can provide; I am at your service.”

Vano smiled. “You can call me Vano. It’s my middle name.”

Nyx chuckled. “Until we meet again, Vano.”

“Until we meet again.”

Nyx acted as a lookout for her father while Vano and Meep escaped the library. After hurrying back up the steps and toward the tree arch gate, Vano paused a moment and looked back. He suddenly remembered that he hadn’t looked inside the book he grabbed, and had just left it on the reading bench behind the stair. His heart filled with regret as he realized he could no longer go back for it. Ikalis was there, and unlike Nyx, he wouldn’t hesitate to get Vano mobbed by every magician in the place. Besides, who knew how many more of them were prisoners from Ost Tera? He stared longingly at the library for a moment, committing its glorious image to memory. He knew he would never see it again.

Then, with a remorseful sigh, he turned and plunged through the gate.  

----

The sun was sinking and darkness was setting in quickly about Niris Tul when Vano finally returned to the mire house. As he drew near it, Meep suddenly gave a shrill chirp. “What is it, Meep?” He asked.

The specter leaped from his shoulder and scurried toward the cottage beneath the tree. Vano watched him go in confusion. The house looked fine. Then suddenly, his heart froze. THAT’S what was wrong: He could see the house! The Faux Fairy Ring potion didn’t sound like something that should be temporary, something had to be wrong. Vano sprinted after Meep. Upon passing the ring of mushrooms, Vano noticed they had been violently slashed. As the two arrived together at the door, they found it was broken. Dread filled his mind and heart. He could detect Bridgette within the cottage, but he didn’t know whether the Potation of Location stopped working if the other person was dead.

Passing the threshold into the house, Vano found all the planters and garden boxes had been overturned. The chairs were all destroyed, the cauldron had a horrible gash in its side, and the table lay partially shoved into the fireplace. Bridgette stood in the midst, quietly salvaging what she could.

“Bridgette! Are you alright? Are you hurt? What happened here?” Vano panted.

Bridgette turned to look at him. Her face was expressionless, but her eyes shone with disillusion and weariness. She turned away, pointing to the table. There, as if written by a flaming brand, was a name: CORVIN.

“He must’ve found the place while we were out, and left his name behind so we’d know who did it.” Bridgette muttered. Vano knelt beside her, aiding in the cleanup. Meep, too, began to help where he could. “It was starting to feel like home again, you know? I should’ve known it was too good to be true.”

“Yeah, we were getting too comfortable here.” Vano mused as he turned the table over. The table legs were uneven now, burnt and blackened, it couldn’t even stand up straight anymore. Staring at the name on its face, he didn’t even want to salvage it. Bitterly, he drew out his dagger and began to carve into the wood. The blade glimmered faintly, confirming what Nyx had promised about glowing when near hostility, though Vano assumed from its dimness that the threat wasn't close enough to worry about.

Bridgette noticed the room was suddenly filled with a pink light and turned to discover it’s source. She approached Vano slowly, looking over his shoulder to see what he was doing. Under the name CORVIN, he had carved the words: IS A DORK.

“Isn’t that Nyx’s dagger?” Bridgette asked, looking at Vano with confusion and concern.

“Yup. I ran into her at the library and she gave it to me. She also gave me this to give to you.” Vano responded casually, offering Bridgette the wrapped parcel. Bridgette took it with no small degree of suspicion and unwrapped it; a silver wand with a green jewel in the shape of a star lay within.

Bridgette’s eyes widened. With a trembling hand, she reached for it, but quickly withdrew and glared up at Vano. “Why would she give you this?”

“It’s part of her apology. She feels bad for what happened.” Vano explained.

“Good. She should.” Bridgette said, thrusting the package into Vano’s hands and turning back to her work.

Vano watched her for a moment. “You know, if you don’t forgive after amends are made, the sin is with you.” He said.

Bridgette spun around with eyes like fire. “Don’t try to make this out as if it were easy! Nyx turned her back on me, just like Miva and Ikalis and everyone else.”

“I know that. So does she. But she’s trying to make it right, and I don’t think we’re in a position to refuse any would-be allies.” Vano argued. Bridgette folded her arms stubbornly and looked away. “She’s sorry, Bridgette.” Vano insisted.

Bridgette looked at him. “I can see that you believe she’s sorry, but I would’ve preferred to be there myself, and see for sure if it was in her eyes or not.”

“Maybe you will someday.” Vano said, “Until then, I have a question for you: What do you intend to do with the amulet?”

Bridgette looked at him in shock. “She told you?!” She shrieked angrily.

“You would’ve had to tell me about it eventually!” Vano replied defensively.

Bridgette growled, turned, and kicked the remains of one of the chairs. Vano was unmoved. After several minutes of seething, Bridgette finally answered through her teeth: “I’m going to destroy it.”

“How?” Vano asked.

“Reverse engineer it. I can undo each spell inside it if I’m the same level as the magician that imbued it.” Bridgette replied, “I just don’t know what those levels were, so I’m aiming for Level 50 because that will cover everything.”

“So that’s why you’re trying to increase your level? I thought it was to help liberate your people.” Vano said.

“I didn’t lie about that. I fully intend to help liberate them, but I can’t until the amulet is unmade. It’s as much as danger to magicians as to humans, because Corvin wants to rule Niris Tul. If he had the amulet--” She paused, “Well, it probably wouldn’t help him succeed. It’s so volatile now, it would probably destroy the place.”

“I’m surprised the thing hasn’t destroyed itself. How much magic can possibly fit in there?” Vano mused. Bridgette only shook her head. Meep scampered around busily at their feet, seemingly unaware that a conversation was even taking place. Bridgette and Vano followed his example. Vano used the table to repair the door; making sure to put the words on the outside in case Corvin stopped by for a visit in the middle of the night. Bridgette gave what was left of the chairs to the fire. The planters were mended and restrung, and the garden boxes put back together, but sadly nothing could be done for the poor cauldron.

When the work was done to a satisfying degree, Bridgette and Vano sat together on the floor in front of the fire. Meep was curled up in Bridgette’s lap, sound asleep. Since Bridgette was still unconvinced of Nyx’s penitence, Vano related everything Nyx had told him, to confirm whether or not there were any falsehoods in the story. Bridgette listened carefully; eventually being forced to admit that it was all true.

“There’s one thing that I’m still curious about: How have you avoided Corvin for so long?” Vano asked.

“Corvin is scared of humans because he doesn’t want to lose his remaining hand, so I took to sneaking into human cities to ward him off.” Bridgette answered.

“By doing that, you’ve been risking your own freedom and your whole purpose. If you were caught and a Magic Bind put on you, your quest to destroy the amulet would fail. You won't be able to exceed level 20.” Vano said.

Bridgette nodded solemnly as she watched the dancing flames. “What else could I do? Corvin was always one step behind me. It was almost worse than having a Witch Hunter on my tail because he never gave me a break, not even for a second. Human cities were the only place I could go to rest for a bit.”

“You have got to be the bravest little girl I have ever met, Bridgette Witch-Hazel.” Vano said, staring at her face.

She looked at him with a proud grin, but there was sadness in her eyes. “It’s not easy being brave. I really wish I could stop for a while.” Vano didn’t reply, so Bridgette stood and stretched. “Corvin knows we’re here, we can’t stay here anymore.”

“You’re right, but we can’t go running out in the dark like sheep without a shepherd.” Vano said, “If Corvin is so afraid of humans, we’ll surround you with them. Let’s go back to Suddlepuff.”

“He's already followed me into Suddlepuff." Bridgette replied.

“What?! When?” Vano demanded.

“The night before we met. It’s why I broke into your house; I had to up the risk for him. I told you; he’s getting braver.” Bridgette explained.

Vano huffed. “Well, this time we'll be on the lookout for him."

"What do you mean?" Bridgette asked.

"You're not going to hide out in Suddlepuff, you're going to live there, and everyone is going to know it.” Vano replied, rolling backward into a standing position.

“What?” Bridgette gasped.

“I’ll introduce you as my ward. Everyone will know about you, and by virtue of your connection to me, they’ll be watching out for you. Who knows? Maybe some of them will even learn to like you.” Vano said confidently.

“And if they don’t?” Bridgette asked dubiously.

“They will. We Suddlepuffians are good at adapting.” Vano laughed, then his smile fell to a look of concern. “You can continue your training in Suddlepuff, right? I know you wanted to come here to level up, but--”

“Actually, about that.” Bridgette beamed as she lifted her hand up for him to see. Her level had changed.

----

Early the next morning; Bridgette, Vano and Meep set out. Initially, Bridgette wanted Meep to return to the swamp and find another magician, but Vano refused to allow it. “We’re taking anything that a magician needs that you can’t find in Suddlepuff.” He said, “That means this wand from Nyx, seeds for a magical resource garden, dirt from Niris Tul for them to grow in, and Meep.”

They were packed, the cottage was clean and secure as well, and some magical resources were still growing in the planters so that the next person who found the house would have a safe place to be. As Vano closed the door for the last time, and the trio turned their back to the mire house, their hearts were heavy. It had become a home for them, and they were sad to leave it.

“The mire house took good care of us.” Vano mused. “It’s hard to say goodbye.”

“We’re not the first people to leave it. I hope someday it can be a permanent home for somebody.” Bridgette added.

So, with the expanse of several hundred miles between them and their destination, the three companions began the long journey home, ever haunted by the knowledge that Corvin was following.

To Be Continued...

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Thank you so much for reading The Witch Child's Amulet! I sincerely hope you've enjoyed it thus far. Don't worry, the story is not over. Vano and Bridgette's adventure will continue for several chapters yet, after a brief intermission.

Chapter 7, currently titled "The Thing About Zevs" , features characters that do not belong to me. I am collaborating with their owner in order to portray them correctly, which is taking a hot minute. Please check back later!